Writing Stuffs: Know the Novel pt 2

 


Yes, I published a few days early, that was intentional! Remember, the 18th is my blogversary, and I want to do a Q&A! If you have any last minute questions for me, pleeeease get them in so I'll be able to see and answer them in time for this Saturday!

anyways back to business. 

Alright, alright, alright... 

It's that time of the month again.

Knowwww the Novel part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So let's jump right into it!!!

For those who don't know what Know the Novel is, here's a quick explanation:
 Know the Novel is a 3-part tag for writers, one for each of these last three months of the year. Each part will feature ten questions you can answer on your own blog (or anywhere else on social media!). The questions will be focusing on different parts of your novel and how the writing is progressing.
This tag was created by Christine Smith. Check out her blog to find out more about the tag and see other authors' WIP.

Let's get starteeeeeeeeeeeeeeed.


1. How’s the writing going overall?

So far, so good! I randomly decided about a week ago to add in a new part to the plot that wasn't supposed to be important... but it is important. So that very much happened, buuuut other than that it's great!

2. What’s been the most fun aspect about writing this novel so far?

The most fun aspect...? Ah. Um. Well. Um. I guess I'll say just figuring out what's happening at all. The plot. Has CHANGED. AT LEAST THIRTY TIMES. >_< halp

3. What do you think of your characters at this point? Who’s your favorite to write about?

The characters?


OH YEAH THE CHARACTERS ARE FINEEEEEEEEE. DEFINITELY NOT GETTING KIDNAPPED. DEFINITELY NOT THREATENING EACH OTHER TO STOP KIDNAPPING THE SMOL CHILDREN. DEFINITELY NOT---

stopping now.

ahem.

I like my characters and everything about them. They are great. They are super cool. They are some of my favorite cast that doesn't just cause chaos everywhere although they do cause plenty of chaos so I do like my characters.

My favorite to write is... mmm, either Kel or Dabe. Dabe is in the category of "fun-to-write" whereas Kel is in the category of "WHY-DO-I-DO-THIS-TO-MY-HUMANS" and he's very... challenging to write (in a good way). 

btw I made a post about all my characters, check it out here

4. Has your novel surprised you in any way?

As I said above, the plot has changed at least thirty times, and some of those changes I'm not sure are for the best??? So I have been very surprised with several twists and changes that have thrown themselves at me, but mostly in a good way. I've also been surprised by a character who decided she wasn't planning on chilling in the background and was going down and dirty. I did enjoy that greatly.

5. Have you come across any problem areas?

Problem areas? Well, I was stuck in one chapter for a while, but that was mostly because it was right in the middle of school crazy and other stuff, so it wasn't so much that the section itself was a "problem area" and just that I couldn't get past it because of tiiiiime. Other than that, no problem areas, really.

6. What’s been your biggest victory with writing this novel at this point?

*big breath*

I HIT 60K WORDS AND I'VE REACHED 200 PAGES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

obviously that isn't super duper long, and it's probably gonna be a bit longer, but all of my other stories have ended either at 99 pages (that actually happened >_<) or maybe 150. SO THE FACT THAT I'M GETTING SO FAR ALONG HAS MADE ME SO FREAKIN' HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYY.

*lets out breath*

I'm also really happy because I finally reached the section that made me want to keep writing this novel at a point where I was debating stopping. (so I guess there was a problem area, I just don't remember where it was) I am veryyyyy happy right now!

7. If you were transported into your novel and became any one of the characters, which one do you think you’d be? Would you take any different actions than they have?

AHH I DON'T WANT TO BE ONE OF MY CHARACTERS. I'd probably end up being Alith, if I was in there, because she's the one who's the most "normal" in a sense... Would I take any different actions? I wouldn't have punched Garrin... actually maybe I would...? I don't think I would've done anything differently than what she does. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

8. Give us the first sentence or paragraph then 2 (or 3!) more favorite snippets!

Oh you want snippets now. I see how it is.

first bit:

Serwrenna thrust her heavy broadsword forward, lodging it deep in the bark of a nearby pine tree. She tugged on it, but the blade wouldn’t budge. She glanced to the side as her opponent approached, his own sword ready to strike.

She made the split second decision to drop her sword’s hilt and drew one of the small throwing knives always sheathed on her belt for crises.

Her enemy, a tall brute with small glittering black eyes, bared his teeth at her in a vile grin. “You think you can stop me with that?”

Serwrenna flicked her attention at the small blade for a split second, easily dancing out of the way on nimble feet as the ruffian lunged at her. She let out a quiet tsk-tsking sound and shook her head in a slow, mocking way. Stall a little longer, hse thought. Letting a lofty lilt spice her words, she responded, “My sir, I have stopped many a large person with a simple knife. I know I can stop you.”

and now for a few others....

Garrin didn’t waver. “Well, I’m afraid your concerns were unprecedented, because I have everything sorted out already.” He allowed his gaze to roam around the area, refusing to blink even though the rain was coming down harder. “So if you’ll kindly remove your men, we can continue business as usual.”

“I’m afraid I cannot do that, Director,” was the answer. Hakkyn’s features were all scrunched together in mock apology, except his eyes which gleamed dangerously. “My business with you specifically is drawing to a close unless the insurgents I have now repeatedly mentioned are brought here.”

_______________________________________________________

“Last question. Why is your hair so short?”

Alith ran a hand along her shorn locks, frowning slightly. The longest strands brushed the tip of her chin while the shortest tickled just below her ears. She didn’t think it was so much shorter than Serwrenna’s; it was just choppier. “It won’t get caught in machinery or anything this length.”

“And it won’t fly in her face while moving quickly either,” Kel added, materializing behind her.

Alith jumped at his sudden appearance and turned to him, her frown turning playful. “How long were you listening?”

“Just long enough to hear them asking about your hair.” He reached over and plucked the remainder of her breakfast from the table in front of her. “If we’re on the topic of length, why is your hair so long, Dabernell?”

Serwrenna smirked at her brother. “Yeah, Dabernell.”

Dabe’s face once more took on the color of a ripe tomato, and he scowled at his sister, also fingering his chin length strands of hair. “It makes me look dashing.”

Ellythian snorted. “Who’re you kidding, Dabe, it makes you look rumpled.”

Dabernell glared at her before turning to Ollyn, who was silently snickering. “Stop laughing at my hair!”

_______________________________________________________

Dabe replaced his hat and stalked toward them. “Hey! Let her go.”

Alith turned toward him, her eyes wide and angry. “Dabe. I said no talking.”

“I’m bad at listening.” Dabe waited until the stranger faced him. “Let her go.” He laid a hand on his knife’s hilt, waiting.

The man stepped away from Alith, lifting his hands. “I wasn’t going to hurt her, kid.”

“Kid?” Dabe snorted. “I don’t think I’m a whole lot younger than you.”

Alith stepped to his side, hooking her arm through his. “Dabe, this is Andre. He’s…” she hesitated, frowning. “He was our friend.”

“Was?” Andre crossed his arms. “That hurts, Alith.”

“I’m so not sorry.”

__________________________________________________________

“I want you to come with me. There’s plenty to do, so you wouldn’t be bored. And maybe we…” he trailed off. “Never mind. It’ll be somewhere safe where I can show you more of my world.” He reached for her again, this time taking her hand for real. “Please.”

She stared at their linked hands, her heart fluttering in that way she refused to acknowledge. “I don’t want to leave Treridon.”

“It won’t be easy,” Kel agreed, “but I have to ask, is it really home anymore?”

Wren closed her eyes against a sudden surge of tears. “It might not be welcoming, but it will always be home.”

“It’s time to move on now.” Kel took a deep breath before releasing her hand and stepping back, turning aside as well. “For both of us.”


9. Share an interesting tidbit about the writing process so far! (For example: Have you made any hilarious typos? Derailed from your outline? Killed off a character? Changed projects entirely? Anything you want to share!)

Oh. Well, if someone died, why would I say anything about it, hm? I don't remember my funny typos enough to put them here, although there was one time I was trying to write "tapestry" and ended up with "pastry"...  I don't even remember why I was writing tapestry in the first place??? 


10. Take us on a tour of what a normal writing day for this novel looks like. Where do you write? What time of day? Alone or with others? Is a lot of coffee (or some other drink) consumed? Do you light candles? Play music? Get distracted by social media (*cough, cough*)? Tell all!

By now, I have commandeered one of my big sisters' desks, so that's my general writing nook. I've been doing most of my long writing sessions around 9-10:30... And usually alone, because I'm becoming a smol, lonely, introverted writing bean. I have fInAlLy been allowed to start drinking coffee regularly, buuuut only if I drink it in the morning hours... so it hasn't contributed to my novel at all. I've been playing music; I made a full playlist for A Word Unbroken that I have been listening to.... a lot. And social media... I've gotten distracted by Harry Potter and Star Wars memes on Pinterest a little too much sometimes... but no other social media. So my writing life has really been coming out at night, which is a new phenomenon for me. I've gotten maybe a paragraph in during five minute breaks in classes or whatever, but yeah.



So that's Know the Novel Part 2! Hope you enjoyed! Check out the original post at Christine's blog! Thanks for bearing with me!! 

bye

October Doings

 


Well, hello there, peeps! 

It appears to be that Saturday where I tell you about my life.

My life is something else these days. Buuut let's not get all into that right here. Let's just get into other stuffs now!

Actually, first off, I have a quick announcement. I think I've mentioned it before, but I want to pop it in here again in case y'all forgot. My blogversary is coming up next month! I'd like to do a Q&A post on that day. SOOOOOOO if you have any pressing questions about me, my writing, my chaotic anything, or just a general question, pleeeeeease pop it into the comment section, preferably on this post, but if you do it on others that's fine too! Like, seriously guys, please give me questions. I'm still gonna do something on the 18th if I don't get any, but it'll be a lot more fun if I have to wade through all your curiosities!

Anyways, on with the showwwwww!

HIKING

where? Cumberland Knob, on the Blue Ridge Parkway
how long? about 3 miles
pictures???? Oh baby


 we went for the sunrise, which was hard to see because it was rather overgrown, but it was still so pretty! And of course, I like getting pictures of water...


PICTURES



                                            ^ zoo time!!!! ^

 <-- Narnia the Musical (obviously couldn't get pictures of the actual show...)

I love fall --> 
 <-- an embroidery I made 


 aaaaand Halloween!

READING

Because I'm lazy, even though I only ready five books in October, I'm not going to do the cover picture this time round. Sorry. I am a smol lazy bean.

Five Enchanted Roses by... various authors? I suppose that what you say for an anthology? *rating: 3.5 stars* 

Inheritance by Christopher Paolini *rating: 4 stars*

Redwall by Brian Jacques *rating: 4.5 stars*

Last of the Mohicans by James Fenimor Cooper *rating: 3.5 stars*

Tainted by Morgan L. Busse *rating: 4 stars*

So that was my life last month! PLEASE SHOOT ME A QUESTION OR TWO IN THE COMMENTS. PLEASE. I BEG YOU.

Also, I just want to give y'all a heads up, December will be... unique. I'm currently trying to figure out an advent funsy to do, so this place of chaos will be CHAOTIC. Get ready for more story world mashups, the final part of Revenge of the Unwritten, and more! 

okay bye

Extr-y Extr-y 2.0! Here come a bunch of CHARACTERS!!!!

 


As I promised, this is the extra post about my characters from A Word Unbroken. It's going to be fairly simple. I have a few things I'll showcase for each character:

- full name (and pronunciation)

- age

- where they are originally from

- three songs I feel match them

- primary weapon

- color associated with them

- relationship with other characters

- favorite of their quotes from the story

- a few adjectives/adverbs to describe personality

And that's all I'll be looking at for each of them. Let me know if I should do something like this for any of the other stories I've eluded to.

Before I get any farther, I wanna let you know how to pronounce the two places everyone will be from:

-Treridon = trare-IH-dawn

-Qaris = CAR-iss


Alright, let's get started!


Serwrenna "Wren" Myhlber (sir-WREN-uh mill-BAR)

age: 16

from: Treridon

songs: "Castle of Glass" by Linkin Park; "Hero" by Mountains vs. Machines; "The Upside" by Lindsey Stirling

weapon: Broadsword

color: dark purple

relationship: sister to Dabe and Ollyn

quote: “It’s nice being with other people who aren’t trying to kill you the whole time.”

personality: broken, reserved, not ready, loyal, unapologetic 




Kel Berweth (KEL burr-WITH)

age: 17

from: Qaris

songs: "Lost" by Linkin Park, "Dragon" by Skybourne, "Never Going Back" by The Score

weapon: three barreled lumo-gat

color: green-gray

relationship: brother to Ryder

quote:  “We trusted each other. I don’t understand what happened.”

personality: understanding, cautious, protective, too serious, natural, haunted




Dabernell "Dabe" Myhlber (DAY-burr-NELL mill-BAR)

age: 17

from: Treridon

songs: "Distorted Light Beam" by Bastille; "Legends are Made" by Sam Tinnesz; "See Me Fight" by Two Steps from Hell

weapon: longsword

color: light blue

relationship: brother to Wren and Ollyn

quote: “Is she someone we talk to, or do I need to yell at her too?”

personality:  cocky, intelligent, chivalrous, restless, loving




Alith** (AY-lith) **family name unknown

age: 17

from: Qaris

songs: "Surviving the Game" by Skillet; "I'll Fight for You" by Britt Nicole; "Counting Stars" by OneRepublic

weapon: four barreled lumo-gat

color: indigo

relationship: grew up with Kel and Ryder

quote: “I might not know how to use this thing really well yet, but I do know it looks pretty sharp.”

personality: misunderstood, angry, lonely, rule breaker, loyal, sheltered, willing




Garrin Teccur (gare-IN teh-KUR)

age: 21

from: Qaris

songs: "In the End" by Linkin Park; "My Demons" by STARSET; "Never Going Back" by Skillet (yes, there's two different songs with the same title... that will happen several times here)

weapon: four barreled lumo-gat

color: silver

relationship: supposed to be Kel, Ryder, and Alith's guardian

quote: “I’m afraid your concerns were unprecedented, because I have everything sorted out already.”

personality: tired, intelligent, closed, uncertain, trying, persistent




Ollyn Dhane (OH-lin DANE)

age: 15

from: Treridon

songs: "Crawling" by Linkin Park; "Rise Up" by TheFatRat; "Silence, A Stranger" by the Arcadian Wild

weapon: longsword

color: maroon

relationship: adopted brother of Wren and Dabe

quote: I will make you proud.

personality: loyal, secretive, hurting, protective, silent, revengeful




Star Symmins (STAR SIGH-mins)

age: 14

from: Treridon

songs: "Why Walk When You Can Fly" by Andrew Peterson; "Fireflies" by Owl City; "Heroes" by Zayde Wolf

weapon: sickle

color: white (I had to highlight the word in black so it would actually show up. her color is white, I promise)

relationship: sister of Elly, adopted daughter of Correl and Jasa

quote: “I didn’ eavesdrop, if that’s what you're wonderin’.”

personality: sweet, innocent, unassuming, surprising, quirky, underestimated




Andre Pozor (on-DRAY POE-zor)

age: 19

from: Qaris

songs: "Already Over" by Red; "Dominion" by Skillet; "The Last of the Real Ones" by Fall Out Boys

weapon: five barrelled lumo-gat

color: navy blue

relationship: fiance of Jordi

quote: “I say break the deals and give him the boot.”

personality: cocky, trying, doesn't understand, honest, fighter




Ryder Berweth (RIDE-er burr-WETH)

age: 15

from: Qaris

songs: "Bones" by Imagine Dragons; "Chosen" by TheFatRat; "Champion" by neoni (see, I told you there were duplicated titles...)

weapon: one barreled lumo-gat 

color: light red

relationship: brother to Kel

quote: “Hey, I’m not entirely useless. I like to read.”

personality: underestimated, powerful, caring, scared, smart, sharp-eyed 




Ellythian "Elly" Symmins (el-I-thee-IN SIGH-mins)



age: 18

from: Treridon

songs: "Monody" by TheFatRat; "I Don't Care" by Apocalyptica; "Warriors" by Imagine Dragons

weapon: spear

color: forest green

relationship: sister of Star, adopted daughter of Correl and Jasa

quote: “But we’re a team now, and we protect each other.”

personality: withdrawn, too serious, broken, lonely, protective, smart




Jordi Warren (jor-DEE war-EN)

age: 22

from Qaris

songs: "The Anthem of Mr. Dark" by The Arcadian Wild; "My Songs Know what you Did in the Dark" by Fall Out Boy; "Even If It Hurts" by Sam Tinnesz

weapon: five barreled lumo-gat

color: lavender

relationship: fiance of Andre

quote: “It’s a good thing I love you, or else I’d be pummeling you into tiny pieces.”

personality: caring, indignant, trustworthy, understanding, underestimated




Jasa Symmins (JAH-suh SIGH-mins)

age: 43

from: Treridon

songs: "Those Days" by Lindsey Stirling; "Rain Clouds" by the Arcadian Wild; "Where Do We Go" by Lindsey Stirling

weapon: none

color: light yellow

relationship: wife of Correl, adopted mother of Elly and Star

quote: “Can we get back to the original subject at hand, please? I know you all adore beating each other up, but let’s try to be adults for at least five minutes.”

personality: loving, motherly, peaceful, understanding, wise




Correl Symmins (core-ROLL SIGH-mins)

age: 45

from: Treridon

songs: "Back One Day" TheFatRat; "Legends Never Die" by League of Legends; "Monster" by Imagine Dragons

weapon: rapier

color: burnt orange

relationship: husband of Jasa, adopted father of Elly and Star

quote: “Ha, takes more‘n that to git me.”

personality: ready, tired, mentor, resolute, vigilant

Random Ramblings 3.0

*** warning: spoilers for Ahsoka series ahead*** 



Well, hello everybody! Welcome back! I partially have energy again...

School is a little less draining now that I'm back in the swing of things, but there's still so. Much. Happening!!! ack.

Anyways.

Before I get into ramblings, I have a quick announcement! My blogversary is coming up next month! I'd like to do a Q&A post on that day. SOOOOOOO if you have any pressing questions about me, my writing, my chaotic anything, or just a general question, pleeeeeease pop it into the comment section, preferably on this post, but if you do it on others that's fine too! Please get your questions to me by November 10th so I have time to work on answering them. Thanks, y'all!!!!


Okay, back to ramblings! Just before the Ahsoka series was released I did a post on Star Wars Rebels and what to expect and why I like it. Now that Ahsoka is fully out and has been for a while, I'd like to do a quick post on my opinion of it!

Right off the bat, I'm gonna say I liked the show. It definitely wasn't what I was expecting, and I feel like a more precise name for it should have been Ahsoka: Although we Focus More on Sabine. They continued the story from where Rebels left off very nicely, and the characters were very much themselves-- except Ahsoka. 

In my opinion, the live action Ahsoka's character has changed very dramatically. She was always the headstrong, charge right into a fight without really worrying about the repercussions, let's save as many as we can kind of Jedi, like Anakin. I don't have many really big issues on her growing up and understanding that she isn't the unstoppable hero, but it just kind of happened... 

She's the best character in the Clone Wars, the one you really see grow from snippy, annoying, etcetera to smart and experienced. I know it's been twenty odd years since Clone Wars, so obviously she's gonna grow older and wiser,  but I just feel like not having anything showing that transition makes her just seem so different. (so if a new show/movie called "Fulcrum" was to be announced, I would all for it... seeing her time growing as a rebel spy/informer? I need that) 

Also, there's that one part in episode three, I think, when she tells Sabine something along the lines of, "we might have to choose between saving Ezra and saving the galaxy from the Empire's return. I'm trusting you to make the right choice." I heard that, and I was like, "that's not the Ahsoka I know...?" I mean, where's the Ahsoka that unleashes Maul to be her distraction even though he'll probably escape and wreak havoc who knows where? Where's the Ahsoka who tries to fight an army of Mandalorians UNARMED in order to save a small backwater village not even part of the Republic? Where's-- Okay, I'mma stop. 

I just feel like her personality throughout the Clone Wars was set up as ready to save a few, not looking at the bigger picture, ya know, that stuff. I don't like how they just toss that down the drain because it's been several years.

Moving away from ranting about Ahsoka's personality, there's also the fact that Sabine is a Jedi now??? 

In Rebels, Kanan, a Jedi, literally says that Sabine is the LAST PERSON WHO WILL EVER BE A JEDI OR USE THE FORCE. She has literally closed herself off from ever being able to use the Force. And yet here's Ahsoka telling her anyone can use the Force... Excuse, are you saying then that the entire galaxy could've been Jedi, but only a few tiny infants are kidnapped chosen to be trained?

Also, more character continuity: I thought in Mandalorian Season 2 Ahsoka said she wouldn't train Grogu because he was a) too old and b) too attached to Din Djarin. Sabine is very obviously attached to Ezra/Hera/Zeb/whole Spectre crew. So... is Ahsoka just choosing favorites?? Or... was that statement not a reference to Anakin, but to Sabine? If it's about Sabine, okay, that makes some things better. If it's about Anakin... AHSOKA YOU NEED TO STOP PICKING FAVORITES LIKE THE COUNCIL.

Final issue I'll mention here... every time Ezra's original lightsaber, the one Sabine uses, is mentioned, they say "Ezra gave it to you (Sabine)" or something else in that same framework. I literally found the scene when Ezra goes to confront Thrawn.

He gives his lightsaber to Chopper.

And then Chopper gives the lightsaber to Sabine.

Don't believe me? Watch this . And this...

See what I'm saying????? EZRA DIDN'T GIVE HIS SABER TO SABINE. SHE JUST CLAIMED IT AND EVERYONE ROLLED WITH IT.

Sorry.

Anger issues.

Anyways, for a few quick things I did like...

> the fact the Jacen Syndulla existed
> the live action Loth-cat
> the planet visuals (oh my word, Lothal was spot on!!!!!!)
> the Ghost and the Phantom II being accurate 
>Ahsoka's dueling
> Sabine's dueling, actually (she does learn how to use a saber in Rebels. I like that bit of continuity)
> THE WHOLE WORLD BETWEEN EPISODE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
> the mural scene in the second (or third?) episode because oh my word it's perfect
> the cameos in the first episode for Ryder Azadi, Jai Kell, and I feel like there was someone else...
> Chopper XD
> THE PERGIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
> Eigth Brother reincarnated????
> AHCKK EZRA WAS SPOT ON
> when Ezra builds his new lightsaber in the same style as Kanan's. 
> the howlers <3
> did I say the World Between episode?
> Sabine and Ezra's Force leap/push (the one time I liked that Sabine used magic, because Kanan/Ezra call back!!!!) 
>Ahsoka's white robes

Overall, I thought it was pretty good! I liked it better than the Mandalorian and Andor, but not quite as much as the Bad Batch/Clone Wars/Rebels. I still have not seen Boba Fett, and since I haven't been super enamored with the live action shows, I don't think I will.

I'm just gonna drop one last statement, if you're gonna name a show after one character, try focusing more on them instead of splitting it up so much. I enjoyed Sabine's parts, and I enjoyed Hera's parts, but (Hera's especially) felt like it took away from what was really going on and made Ahsoka's arc feel a bit rushed.

Other than that, and the other ranting from above, I have 0 complaints😇

Thanks for reading along with my ranting ramblings, and I hope you have a great day! PLEEEEEEEASE drop me some questions for my Q&A! 

Please.

I beg of you.

Okay, bye.