ANNOUNCEMENT

 

AS IT IS THE END OF MAY

I have an announcement to make.


I am going to take a break from blogging, at least weekly, for the next few months.

Why?

Well, I want to focus on writing Team 14 right now, and every time I go to write when I need to post here, I get either really annoyed or really worried. SO we're going to just put it out there that The Place of Chaos will be a Place of Quiet for at least three/four months. 

I might occasionally drop something random here, like an update on how T14 is going or a highlight from the summer or something like that.


Anyways, see y'all later!

Writing Stuffs




 I currently have nothing new going on with Team 14, except that I'm starting over with *gasp* an OUTLINE. So we'll see how it continues to go.


A quick snippet so this post is actually substantial because I'm nice:


"I suppose this was an experiment, but one that will benefit us all. Besides, as soon as I learned you had who I needed, I immediately called for the bloodshed to cease.”

“Who?” Arlec cut in. “You said who you needed.”

“I did.” Warmian spread his arms out again and raised his voice to address the whole square. “My friends, I am a mage, the greatest of all mages in this era. I am seeking a new apprentice, and one of your young has the potential to become that apprentice.”

Arlec answered for the chief, his voice weary. “Who is the boy?”
Warmian pointed at the crowd, and the warriors drifted apart, most with surprise written across their faces, meaning they were probably moved against their will. An aisle cleared straight from Warmian to--
“Krever?” Larkin grabbed his shoulder as his feet slid forward without him moving them. Her tone was panicked as she gripped him tightly, keeping him in place. “Krever?”
“I don’t want to go with you,” Krever announced quickly. This man was unnatural and twisted. He was the last type of person Krever would ever want as a trainer.
Warmian wasn’t much taller than Krever, but he somehow managed to look down his nose at the boy. “You’d prefer to let your village burn?”

(fyi there are a few bits that i chopped out so it was a little shorter for this sneak peak, but tada)


AND THAT'S ALL I HAVE TODAY SORRY 'TWAS SHORT

April Readings

 

Okay heres the book list im not doing an intro or anything youre welcome im sorry


The First Starborn - Bryan Davis *3.5 stars*

Tales of Light and Life - various authors *4 stars*

The Rise of Skywalker - Rae Carson *4 stars* (hehhhhhhh it definitely did not make me scream and kinda like the movie but them i remembered the movie didnt have all the internal thoughts so it was terrible)

Path of Deceit - Tessa Gratton *3 stars*

Defy the Storm - Justina Ireland *2 stars*

Path of Vengeance - Cavan Scott *3.5 stars*

Calculated - Nova McBee *4.5 stars*

Tuck - Stephen A. Lawhead *4 stars*

Reapers - Bryan Davis *3.5 stars*


i dont know if you actually wanted to see that if you were actually dying to see my reading from april but tada sorry it was late 

April Doings

 


Here we are again.

Welcome back to this Place. Ever wonder why you return?

Hope not, because I'm always glad you do!

APRIL WAS SOMETHING ELSE. As of April, I have officially visited all the colleges I want to, and I believe I have an idea of where I want to go! But we'll get into that at another time.

HIKING

Where? Historic Tour, Mammoth Cave, KT

How long? Stairs? 

Pictures? Thought you would never ask...

(btw I've decided to just use collages. Blogger likes me better when I do...)


PICTURES



The top collage is the TOTAL ECLIPSE as viewed from Greensburg, Indiana (plus doggo's eyeball...)
The middle one is the Ark Encounter in Kentucky -- if you are EVER in that area, VISIT IT. It was so cool. So cool.
The bottom one is a mish-mash. I didn't get any pictures at Cedarville University, but I did get a picture of Boyce College (top right) and my second visit to North Greenville University (bottom right). My cat was interested in my camera (top left) and I have created my first cosplay (bottom right). actually wait that's a really bad picture of the cosplay, let me throw the actual thing up here by itself...
hehheheheh tada

MUSIC

don't-don't look at this section. please.
please.

don't judge me. i'm in a musicals phase.


READING

okay again pleeeeease don't kill me, but I am writing this post in a hotel room in VA, and I do not have my reading log nearby... i don't have Goodreads; I do things the "old fashioned" way and keep a handwritten reading record.

Sooooo thissectionisstayingemptyuntiligetbackandtheniwilleitheraddtothispostorcreateanentirelynewpostdedicatedtoapologiesandtheofficiallist. 
yeah

sorry.



ANYWAYS THERE YOU HAVE IT THANKS FOR READING I'LL PROBABLY POST BEFORE NEXT SATURDAY BYE





May the Fourth be With You

 

Hello there.


It is...

may 4th.

and for those shameful few who do not know what may 4th entails.

'tis star wars day.


ANDFORTHOSEEVENMORESHAMEFULFEWWHODIDNTKNOWIADORESTARWARSSOGETREADYFORSOMEEPICFANGIRLING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anyhoo.

Two years ago, I did a ranking of all the Star Wars movies on May 4th as my way to celebrate. If any of y'all are curious to see my opinions from two years ago, check it out. If you're interested in my opinions of the here and now, well, you're in the right post.

WE WILL ONCE MORE BE RANKING THE STAR WARS MOVIES, INCLUDING:

-the OG trilogy

-the Prequel trilogy

-the sequel trilogy

-the three standalone movies

AAAAAAND A SEPARATE RANKING OF: 

-the TV shows (that i have seen, so excluding BoBF)

THIS IS GOING TO BE INSANE

buckle up


#12: The Rise of Skywalker


On the last list, RoS was in ninth... aaaaand then I rewatched it and realized that basically any character development for Rey & Ben had been chucky-cheesed out the window, LEIA SHOULD NOT BE ALIVE, somehow Palpatine returned and ruined everything that mattered in the OG trilogy, and half of these new side characters literally do nothing. So yeah, it's bad now.


#11: Solo

Solo has not moved from it's spot last year, and it most likely will never. It is not a memorable movie, and it does not match who Han Solo is in any capacity. For more thoughts, check out the post linked above.


#10: Attack of the Clones

Has also not moved... just too... well, here. (alert: there is one use of swearing) That video. Explains Episode 2. Better than anything else I have ever seen.


#9: The Last Jedi

So RoS and LJ have switched places. If you read my last random ramblings post, you will see my full review of Episode 8. The main thing that elevated it a bit was just the story works a little better and the romance isn't about sand.


#8: The Clone Wars (movie)

AGAIN has not shifted positions. It's one of those "I like the others better, but it's fine." I do love this movie.


#7: The Empire Strikes Back

Okay, so apparently my taste has not changed at all... Faith, I understand that you said not this time two years ago, but can I still have mercy now?????? I just prefer Yoda when he's less paranoid about seagulls and logs. In all seriousness though, the "hump" of the trilogies aren't always my favorite; I have maybe three exceptions. The fact that ESB was more of a "hey, people like this movie, let's make more!" and not just, "hey, let's continue the story!" makes it a little lower than some of the others. (it also has little to no battles other than Hoth and Leia vs Han in the hallway, so that lowers things a bit too)


#6: The Force Awakens

Sooooo these middle ones are the same as last list.... I just liked the potential in the characters, it didn't feel forced, and the OG characters still felt true to themselves. I am not ashamed to say I liked tFA, even if I can say the other two are AHCKKKNO.


#5: The Phantom Menace

Okay, here's where it got a bit spicy. Because last listing, TPM was #1. What demoted it? Well... I've gotten into filmmaking. Aaaaand there are plenty of things in it that were not necessary and were there for audience thrills. Aaand that lowers it just a bit. I STILL ADORE QUI-GON AND THE DUEL OF FATES IS STILL MY NUMBER ONE DUEL BUT yeah here we are.


#4: A New Hope

(okay, now that's ironic and unintentional... Episode 4 is #4....) Anyways, it's moved up just a little for more or less the same reasons as tPM moving down, since the filmmaking side of it was pretty genius, considering everything was practical effects (at least originally) and it's one of the earliest in its genre. So yeah, here it stands, here it be's. (bad grammar intentional for once)


#3: Rogue One

Again, slightly demoted, but only by one place. The story is amazing, the visuals are amazing, the characters are *sob* amazing. The only thing holding it back is the lack of lightsabers. And no, Chirrut does not count. So basically everything I said last ranking is still accurate.


#2: Revenge of the Sith

Clone Wars has come through once more to push Episode 3 higher again. Also that idiotic child inside me who loves lightsabers... *nerdy grin* Yeah, there's only so many times I can tell myself to shove that movie a little bit lower on the list.


#1: Return of the Jedi

This one may come as a shocker to some, but it's probably one of the ones I've rewatched the most in recent years, other than Episode 1, and I realized that I really like the satisfying character arc completions. And, as someone who was never aboard any Luke-Leia ships, seeing Leia-Han truly finish out together makes me very happy. (also i may or may not have read the scoundrel and the princess, and that may or may not have made me love leia-han even more...)


also, for anyone curious, the pictures were just supposed to be a random scene from each movie, they don't hold aNy emotional significance.


AND NOW FOR THE SERIES.

Since I am not counting Book of Boba Fett, Andor, or Visions since I have not seen them, I only have nine series on my list. I am not providing reasons here; if wished for, I will do a different post expanding on these opinions. Here is ze ranking:


#9: The Mandalorian

#8: Forces of Destiny

#7: Resistance

#6: Tales of the Jedi

#5: Ahsoka

#4: Kenobi

#3: The Bad Batch

#2: The Clone Wars

#1: Rebels


I don't think many will be too surprised by this part of the ranking. But if you are, please let me know, and I shall explain. ALSO LET ME KNOW YOUR RANKINGS.

May the Force (and the fourth) be with you.

bye


this one


 

I recently (as in Monday) decided to torture myself and rewatch Episode 8 of Star Wars. The Last Jedi. I don't believe it ever made it to the spot of my favorite SW movie, due to the lack of true, amazing, dramatic lightsaber vs. lightsaber duels, but I enjoyed it when it first came out. (then again, i've enjoyed every SW movie the first time i saw it and i think all of them have been the fav for a time).

Anyways, I decided today I wanted to let you know my opinion of The Last Jedi and what I think doesn't work about it. The pros and cons, so to speak. If you weren't aware, SPOILERS AHEAD.

To begin on a positive note, I feel like a lot of what Rian Johnson was trying to do could have worked. A lot of his ideas were very interesting, and there was a lot of potential with what he had. The issue was, he did not focus on that potential as much as he should have. 

For example, Poe's arc as a solo, trigger happy hero to a well rounded leader was well done. There was a lot to juggle with all the different storylines to follow, but he had a start and an end point. The transition between start and finish felt very sudden, but it was there. 

On the other hand, Finn's arc from running away to ready to sacrifice himself was not well done. I don't know exactly where the switch was, and there was little to no sign of growth. Just "Oh, I'm running away... and now I'm saving everyone."

The Rey and Ben thing... okay, so I have a love-hate relationship with Reylo. I don't actually mind it if Rey and Finn get together, because one ehhhh thing in SW is that there is literally no media that has a boy and a girl around the same age who are not in a relationship (thinking Ahsoka-Lux, Ezra-Sabine, Anakin-Padme, Obi-Wan-Satine, Leia-Han) so if Finn and Rey are simply platonic, that's great. I think that there could have been a bit more to Rey and Ben's interactions before she ran to him, but I feel like their Force connection thing is not the worst part of the movie (especially since I dEfInItElY haven't used that in my SW stories...).

HOWEVER A FEW MORE THINGS THAT DON'T WORK...

Leia. Oh, Leia. I am not mad that Leia used the Force. I am not mad she survived in space. There is actually a Force skill that lets Jedi survive in space for short periods of time (confirmed in the High Republic series several times, and witnessed in Rebels and I think Clone Wars). HOWEVER. When the bridge explodes... and everyone else explodes... but Leia just kinda Mary Poppins away from everything... no. It doesn't work like that. The ship explodes, all the people explode. Sorry if that's really morbid, but it's truuuuuue. JUST DIE LEIA. 

Phasma. Why did they bring her back? She was chucked down a garbage chute. Starkiller Base EXPLODED. AGAIN. JUST DIE ALREADY, WOMAN. She was literally brought back for the sole purpose of hyping up audiences for the five second Finn-Phasma duel. Hux or any of the other random officers could have done exactly what she did. Disney, when you kill people, LEAVE THEM DEAD.

Snoke. Okay, so Snoke wasn't terrible? I don't mind that he died in 8 rather than 9. Makes it just a little less like a copy-cat of the originals. However, he was on screen for maybe five minutes and just threw everyone around willy-nilly. If you going to make it so shocking that Ren kills him, let him exist a little more.

Luke. I think what Rian Johnson was trying to do with Luke had potential. So many legends are perfect and selfless and never make mistakes with lasting consequences. Making Luke, the sole surviving Jedi (somehow all the Order 66 survivors are ded?), suffer from hubris is actually great! Grounds the characters, makes them more relatable. He had all the responsibility of the Jedi on his shoulders, trying to train all these Force-sensitive kids, juggling being a war hero, the whole works. He's gonna mess up. I just don't think he would have run away and hid the way he did. It's just not who he is. (also, I don't mind how me dies, it's basically the same as Obi-Wan and Yoda, he just fades into the cosmic Force.)

Canto Bight and DJ. So I understand why they were there, I just didn't think they were necessary. Are you telling me that in all of the crazy mish-mash of the Resistance, there is not a single person who knows how to break into a Star Destroyer? Seriously? And Maz doesn't know a single other codebreaker besides this very particular fellow in a casino? It just... no. And DJ is just there to get them caught... and pull a Lando and all that rot... ugh. NO.

So I'll stop there for now. I've ranted for a while, and I could rant a while longer, but I'll stop there. Hope you got a smidgeon of enjoyment from all this, thanks y'all, bye.

Writing Stuffs


 Hello there, one and all! Last week I was not in places with internet enough to post, so you are receiving this now!

AND IT IS EXCITING NEWWWWWWWWS.

SOOOooooo for the moment the Last Phoenix is on hold? We figuring out what to figure out about that crazy little thing. 

INSTEADWEREWORKINGONASTORYTHATSLIVEDINOURBRAINFORTHEPASTEIGHTTONINEYEARSANDISFINALLYHAPPENINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

and we dont have much about it yet, but i just wanted to let you know whats what.

Anyone who has seen my MUCH older posts has heard of Team 14 (i think i've mentioned it a few times more recently, but not a whole lot about it?) 

AND YES, I have finally decided to work on what is I think the sixth or seventh version to be started.

I don't have much on it yet, but I made a collage.... and I wanted to explain what's happening since I did scream about TLP last month so much.

Anyways.

collage

Team 14 is currently the working title, because I don't know how much of the original idea of where that name came from is going to be incorporated, but it's been called "Team 14 (t14)" for the past probably 8 years, so we're just going with that right now.

Hey, if y'all want a post of all of my past title ideas that will never see the light of day otherwise, let me know! I think that could be fun, but it might just weird all y'all out.

Oh, I also have a Spotify playlist. Enjoy.

SOooooo really short post today, but I don't want to jinx myself with writing this. Just be warned to those who do know something about T14 already, it will be very different. Some of the characters in the "team" proper that have been mentioned won't exist at all, most are very different, and one is already deceased. I'm so excited with how this is turning outttttttttttttt. (the two point one chapters i have so far...)

OOOOOOOH ALSO BECAUSE I AM SO PUMPED ABOUT BASICALLY EVERY ASPECT OF LIFE RIGHT NOW HERE IS ARTWORK OF A CHARACTER:
Zarkah (supposed to be pronounced ZAIR-kuh, but I don't know...?)

okay, I'm going to stop now. EXCEPT SHOUT-OUT to R.F. Gammon, my older sister and fellow author, who gave me the inspiration to actually do this thing!!!!

okay bye

March Doings

 


Aaaaand here we are again, ready to start the fourth month of the year.

How is it already April, y'all? It literally is not time to be spring yet. Has winter even begun? THERE WAS NO SNOW. THERE IS NO MUD. It cannot be spring yet. IT'S OFFICIAL.

Anyways.

On to LIFE.

HIKING

oh yeah i forgot about this.

i didnt go hiking this month... again....

turns out working makes you really busy. who knew?


PICTURES

Okay, soooooo blogger decides it has had enough of my so-so photography, so it has decided to not let me insert all the pictures I want to into this article. Soooo I made a collage. 🤓🤓🤓

From left to right, top to bottom:
1. I have no idea what work is doing to my hair...
2. My future bridesmaid's dress. LOOK AT THE SKIRRRRRRRRT
3. Just some pretty flowers. The only reason it miiiiight be spring...
4. Just a picture I thought turned out really cool, a tree by a little creek. Closest ting to a hike this month, but there was no trail, just a little step out of the parking lot to the river.
5. THE CAT. of e-vil-nesssss.
6. the fiance and fiancee came for a visite.
7. I took part in an Easter choir at my church! I'm the one in the front in the blue shrug looking depressed. Who know spotlights would kill your eyes/sanity/head???

MUSIC

HEHHHHHH do we have to do this one???? 

fine.


For anyone curious, I most certainly am not in a Les Miserables phase...

 but if anyone is interested, i did make a "ultimate les mis" playlist on spotify, feel free to check it out.

i am also happy to answer any les mis related questions you have and am considering doing a post about my favorite version/song/singers/etc of les mis.


READING

well, this was an interesting reading month. it started out more or less book-less, than in the last two weeks, it rocketed again. so here we are:

Escape from Falsaise - John Flanagan *3 stars*

Midnight Horizon - Daniel Jose Older *4 stars*

The Scarlet Pimpernel - Baroness Emmuska Orczy *4.5 stars*

Decree - Tricia Mingerink *4 stars*

Arazan's Wolves - John Flanagan *4 stars*

Blood Secrets - Morgan L. Busse *4 stars*

Uprising - Jennifer A. Nielsen *4.5 stars*

Edge of the Galaxy - Jason Fry *3.5 stars*

A Test of Courage - Justina Ireland *4 stars*

The Secret Academy - Jason Fry *3 stars*

Rebel in the Ranks - Jason Fry *2.5 stars*

yeah, very few Flanagan books this month... not sure why, exactly? but definitely in a High Republic/Star Wars phase. The three Jason Fry books are all based on a side character in SW Rebels, and they were fine with the context I knew. Just lacking a little as books themselves imo and a little too light of reads.

ANYWAYS.


THANKS FOR READING Y'ALL HAVE A GREAT DAY.

I don't know what to call this anymore

 


Today in Kal's Not Necessarily Necessary Opinions, I wish to talk about... Percy Jackson. (apparently this has become my "unpopular opinions" section?) This might get long, y'all, I've got a lot of thoughts.

So I first got into Percy Jackson a few years ago after The Silmaril Awards. I think Annabeth Chase had been nominated for Most Epic Heroine, and I was like, "wait so there actually is someone who has my name/spelling?" (for those who didn't know, my non-pseudonym is Annabeth) I've had people in the past ask me, "Are you named after that girl from Percy Jackson?" No, I'm not. 

Anyways, naming choices aside, I saw that, and I thought, "Huh, okay, let's at least see what we think of this. I've heard it's the modern Harry Potter in the USA, or something?" Aaaaand I read The Lightning Thief.

It was... okay. That was basically my reaction the whole series until the fourth one, which I loved, and then it was just, meh. Interesting. A fun read, but below my usual interests and not really my style. 

Then I heard about some of his other series, like the Heroes of Olympus, and the Trials of Apollo, and one other I don't remember which right now. So I decided to check them out. 

Aaaaand that's where I think it started going a bit downhill?

(SPOILERS AHEAD MOST LIKELY) My biggest issue with Heroes of Olympus for a while was that Rick Riordan made it all too complicated too quickly. He wanted it to be, like, one quest with seven demi-gods. Okay, cool, dewit. No problems there, I do that all the time, just usually zjacknarsions or something instead of halfbloods. But the thing was he introduced all seven and their problems in the very first book (first two, I suppose...) and then resolved it all immediately. 

Jason's and Percy's issue at first was that neither had enough memories of who they were, but they were strange enough that everyone knew they were special. HEH. Middle/near end of the book(s) that got resolved. That one was probably the least problematic, in my opinion, because it could have gotten annoying to go on a quest with two dangerous amnesiacs having no idea what they were doing (oh wait, that happens anyways, just without the amnesia....)

I haven't read The Lost Hero in a while, so I don't remember Piper's and Leo's problems as much, but I think it was basically they were trying to figure out their powers and who they wanted to be? I really don't know, that book didn't stick AT ALL. Because whatever their problems were, they didn't worry about it the entire rest of the time. (actually, I think Piper's was she was worried about her dad being held hostage and whether or not she and Jason were actually a Thing...)

Hazel and Frank, the only ones I truly loved. But...but that was because they were great in the later books? I think Hazel's issue was that she was still living in her past, and Frank's was that he was trying to figure out how to be an interesting demi-god. ONCE AGAIN. Resolved in the middle of Son of Neptune.

And so, the entire rest of the series was either reviving these already resolved issues, or creating new ones that I just... didn't find compelling. 

But all that aside, what really threw me off was in the middle of House of Hades. DEFINITE SPOILERS HERE, NOT THAT I CARE. To cut to the chase, Nico di Angelo reveals that he's had a cruch on Percy for the past like four years, not Annabeth, like everyone (readers and characters) thought, and like how Riordan presented it in Battle of the Labyrinth. There was NEVER any Nico-Percy. And the fact that Riordan decided to add that, possibly just to be able to market as LGBTabc+ whatever, makes me mad.

Percy Jackson was already wobbling along okay-not okay because of the Greek gods and everything that lets the demi-gods *ahem* happen, I guess, but I could look at it as a fantasy story and let it just be the "meh" factor. When Riordan pulled all that into the mess, it was just... nope. I can't fully figure out how to explain what about this particular instance of LGTB mess made me so upset, since it's everywhere by now, it just, felt like too much.

And yet, because I still had terrible judgement and am way to quick to give authors second chances, I decided to read the Trials of Apollo. 

I read the first book, and then quit the whole series.

Someone who's read, was there actually anyone in there who wasn't in a gay relationship? (rhetorical, i knew there were a few, but like, maybe two.) I don't want to get into all that, but still, same thing as the Nico-Percy, except it just existed normally, and it's not normal. 

Aaaaaand then there's the issue of Nero that fully pushed it over. 

So, like I've said, there's always been an issue with the "greek gods are real!" mindset, but this made that issue a little stronger in my opinion.

If you don't know who Emperor Nero is, he was a Roman emperor who strongly persecuted Christians in the Colosseum. I think he may have been the one who had Paul beheaded, but don't take my word for it. 

Anyways, he showed up again. Because, HA Greek mythology brings people back from the dead. Hades, amiright?

But that's not the point, people come back from the dead everywhere, I'm not gonna scream about it. What did make me really REALLY upset was realizing, "hold up, this is the guy who persecuted Christians because they refused to believe the Greek/Roman gods were real, and they refused to worship the emperor as a god...."

See where I'm going with this?

Just like that, one guy brought back from the dead and elevated to god status, Riordan just flushed every single Christian who died under Nero down the drain. And no. Nope. Nup. Not-- no. Just no. 

Anyways, that made me realize that it wasn't just Trials of Apollo who had that, but all of Percy Jackson would have that same issue of "HEY THE FALSE GODS ARE REAL" and I just didn't want to read that anymore. 

I don't know what about Percy Jackson and the Riordanverse makes me so mad, because I still really enjoy Epic: the musical and it's the same Greek gods and everything, and I'm still planning to read the Iliad/Odyssey, but yeah.

Anyways, I have ranted about this for way too long now, and I've probably burned your eyes off. Sorry not sorry if I just ruined Percy Jackson for you. Thank you for reading today!

Writing Stuffs (And I Call for Aid)


 So we're not looking at a whole lot of writing here today, since I am still figuring out what I'm doing with any of my stories. None of them are currently cooperating, so they're all taking a time out while I scream into a pillow.

So what is this post for?

I have a request to make! And an old story to fangirl (sort of) about.

I literally have no idea how to do this, it is a first time thing for me, but we shall give it a go!

I need a Beta Reader for The Last Phoenix. Um. (Am I supposed to add a form here now, or something...? HELP ME please) Someone tell me how all this works, and I'll figure out a form? email chain? whatever? and get it into a later post.

This one is to make you interested in the story.

I think I've mentioned TLP a fewwwww times, and most people who know me in person have actually read it. I wrote it in 5 days (over Easter Break about three years ago) with a solid 40% written in one day thanks to my incredible older sister Sarah who is not a writer but did like sixty Word Wars so I would just WRITE. 

Some current stats:

  • 54 pages
  • about 14k words
  • fantasy quest
  • probably leaning towards middle grade?
  • series potential, but preferably a stand alone

Now for a little bit more info:

The powerful race of phoenixes has been all but extinct for hundreds of years. Their magic to keep  Myleck and its people alive is dying, and the land with it. Most have given up hope of restoration.
Most, but not all. 
Perpetua Ar-Kan still stubbornly believes that there is a chance to bring back the phoenixes. When she is given a chance to do just that by the last phoenix in Myleck, she is determined to not let anything stand in her way. But when Kalleb Chyr-Ja, the son of a legend, is appointed as her quest partner, a boy who prefers to use charm instead of fighting, she begins to find herself on a very different road.
Opposed at every turn by a unicorn, a mysterious and ancient magician, and the very world itself, Perpetua must decide if she's willing to trust the charming Kalleb or if she can stake the fate of Myleck on her shoulders alone.

So that's the blurb. Here's a little on the characters: 

Perpetua Ar-Kan


Perpetua is a generally rather distrusting, preferring to rely on her bow and knife rather than getting help. She prefer to works alone, because then she can focus on her own abilities rather than worry about what everyone else is doing. She is pretty tough and snarky (like most of my characters) but also very caring and good at being worried. She is sixteen years old.



(think Raya from Raya and the Last Dragon, Astrid from How to Train your Dragon, Jyn Erso from Rogue One, Halt from Ranger's Apprentice)



Kalleb Chyr-Ja


  Kalleb is very charismatic and chivalrous, and although he acts like he has no idea what is happening with the weapons and everything, there is more to him than meets the eye. Unlike Perpetua, he is very trusting, and thinks that all problems should be solved with talking things through and making friends instead of shooting their way out. He is extremely loyal, brave, and caring. He is also sixteen.


(think Sisu from Raya and the Last Dragon, Hiccup from How to Train your Dragon, Will from Ranger's Apprentice, Ezra Bridger from Star Wars: Rebels)






yes the art work was done by me probably like two years ago i havent drawn anything new for them yet i need to its pretty bad imo


And now for a few of my little snippets, and that's all for this:

I glared up at him. “I don’t even know you, and the only reason I might trust you is because you claim to be a Chyr-Ja. Do you even have any proof?”

Kalleb leaned against the nest to consider. “I have their good looks, does that count?”

“No.”

~~~~~~~

“Alright Mr. Homing-Pigeon. What’s the scoop? Did my mom recite a super dark prophecy or not?”

“What did you call me?” Kalleb stopped and spun to face me, eyebrows raised high enough to touch his scalp. 

“You said you have an internal compass. You are officially the homing-pigeon of the team.”

“Great, I love being a bird,” he said sarcastically. Then he paused to consider that statement. “I actually do. Like being a bird, you know?”

~~~~~~~~~~~~

I will give you one last chance, Perpetua Ar-Kan. Come back down the mountain, and I will spare you.

I stared upward. Only about two yards above me gaped the opening to the geyser. “Give me about twenty more minutes, and I will.”

Prepare to die.

“Oh, I’ve been ready.” I heaved myself up another foot. “Are you?”


So there you have it! I'll be dropping a little more about wanting Beta Readers soon, but if y'all have any suggestions for how to do that, let me know pleeeeeease!

Thank you good bye.


February Doings

 


Well, hello there one and all. You have returned. As have I.

In to it we go...


HIKING

So I've gone hiking 3-ish? times this month, but I didn't get a whole lot of pics on either, and one was probably less than half a mile, so...

Where? Crowder Mountain State Park 
How long? About six or so miles
Pictures?








Where? New River Gorge National Park
How long? STAIRS
Pictures? 





PICTURES

February was a slightly insane month for me, but once more I am surprised at how few pictures I took...

Anyways, here's what I've got.


Heading to PA to visit another college!













WV, please send some our way.... -->

 puppo is adorzaboo when he eats his ice cweam
La Galette de Rois (king cake) pour Mardi Gras 


MUSIC


READING

Scarlet - Stephen A. Lawhead *4.5 stars*

The Hunters - John Flanagan *4 stars*

Bridge to Terebithia - Katherin Paterson *5 stars*

Duel at Araluen - John Flanagan *3.5 stars*

The Kill Order - James Dashner *4 stars*

The Fever Code - James Dashner *5 stars*

Slaves of Socorro - John Flanagan *3.5 stars*

Poe Dameron: Free Fall - Alex Segura *4 stars*

Scorpion Mountain - John Flanagan *3.5 stars*

The Rising Storm - Cavan Scott *4.5 stars*

Convergence - Zoraida Cordova *4 stars*

The Ghostfaces - John Flanagan *5 stars*

Cataclysm - Lydia Kang *5 stars*


C'est tout! That is all I have for y'all today! I hope you enjoyed this delving into my month. If you want any more juicy secrets about the goings on of moi, let me know, and I'll do my best to be informative. :D

Random Ramblings # whatever it is now



I don't even know what to ramble about right now... I could continue my rants about Star Wars, but I don't want to scare everyone away when I get into fire mode about how Episode 8 could have been so much better...

(If y'all ever think of something you want me to rant about, pop it in the comments and I will do so next Random Ramblings post.)

Maybe I can just ramble about being tired?

...

Maybe I'll talk about my opinions regarding the Bad Batch since Season 3 is coming out in the next few weeks... Yeah, that sounds good. I did a whole spiel about Rebels when Ahsoka was coming out, let's do a spiel about Bad Batch before Bad Batch comes out also we're not going to talk about how i typoed "batch" as "bath" thankfully i noticed before posting this.


THERE WILL BE SPOILERS AHEAD FOR BAD BATCH, CLONE WARS, AND PROBABLY ALL THE OTHER SHOWS. BE WARNED.

Okay, so I've heard several people get upset about BB seasons 1 and 2 because they've said it's basically just continuing Clone Wars and making as many cameos for the characters from their other shows. I have no problems with either of those things. (I guess I'm gonna make this post all about the cameos....)

In Rebels, plenty of people wonder how Hera's side of the rebellion started out, why she had such a rocky relationship with her father, etcetera. I enjoyed her arc, even if it really was just there for the Rebels fans. No one else knew little green twi'lek who dreamed of flying, and even less cared about the maniacal orange bucket that followed her everywhere. Most people who haven't seen Rebels probably don't care. HOWEVER I liked that it gave a little background on Hera's childhood and showed her parents a little more. It might be that, as a Rebels fan, I am a bit biased, but that's my humble opinion.

Plenty of people wonder how Kanan survived Order 66 (unless they read the comics/legends, although how it happened there is entirely different than the new canon). Same as Hera, there could be plenty of people who don't care about this little child with a rat tail hanging from his head and his stoic master. Many don't even know that Caleb Dume is Kanan Jarrus (sorry if I just radicalized everything you know. it's not like it's a big spoiler?). I feel like if you look at it as just BB without thinking about Rebels as well, it's just showing another side of Order 66. Most of what you see in the other movies/shows is all these great Knights and Masters and Younglings getting cut down. Well, here's a different side. There were some Jedi who survived, and not all of them were perfect heroes. Some just turned and ran. It happens. So, even without thinking about the fact that young Caleb = Kanan, I liked that opening to the series, because it just really showed more of Order 66 that isn't emphasized. 

An odd thing that confuses people that know I don't like the Mandalorian is that I actually didn't mind that Fennec Shand was brought into the thick of things. In such a large galaxy, it makes sense that there're bounty hunters we haven't met before, but it is so satisfying for those who've seen the whole extended everything to say, "hey, there's that bounty hunter who went after the Bad Batch! She's back! She's awesome! She's taking on Mando!" Especially since Shand seems to become a good guy? (i haven't seen Book of Boba Fett, by the way, so if i'm totally off on who she is, please don't get mad) The thing I think Mando did the worst was showing exactly how the seeming "baddies" suddenly decided to turn good (and don't say it's because smol cute child because it doesn't work like that), so I appreciate that there's a few moments in BB where we get to see that Fennec Shand actually has at least a sliver of a heart.

Next cameo up is GREGOR the clone. Oh boy, Gregor is... something else. He first appeared in CW with amnesia, having so idea he was even a soldier. That arc ended with him blowing himself and a platoon of battle droids into smithereens. AND THEN SOMEHOW HE SURVIVED FOR REBELS??? I heard Gregor was returning, and I thought, "yay, finally an explanation." Nup. No explantion other than "I once blew myself up and was fine. I can get shot through the LITERAL HEART and be fine too. ehHehHehehhh." Gregor's cameo was the one and only that makes me mad, since that arc felt like it was only a setup to get Hunter captured and they threw him in there to make CW/Rebels fans happy, and it didn't really work... SERIOUSLY FILONI HOW DID HE SURVIVE.

Anyways, next up is Rex. His episodes were really good. I like that it's hinted at a couple times beforehand, and I like that it isn't just there for fan happiness. The Batchers still had their chips, and someone needed to remind them of that. I'm not going to say much more about him, because I thought it worked well.

THE MARTEZ SISTERS. Okay, answer me honestly, does anyone ACTUALLY like Trace and Rafa? There was NO NEED for them to be there. They are IDIOTS and WHY did they have to EXIST again??? Like, literally. They are idiots. There were HUNDREDS of other people who the Batchers could have run into that could connected the Batchers to Rex. It did not have to be the Idiots². I literally don't have anything good to say about them. Omega loves them but Omega loves everyone. That whole episode... it was not needed. Please. WHY.

Cut Lawquane. To be honest, I did not know that the episode in CW where Cut first shows up even existed until after watching his epsiode in BB. I watched it afterwards. Cut is EPIC. HIS WIFE IS EPIC. HIS CHILDREN ARE OMEGA'S BESTIES. Yes. #giveOmegaOtherChildFriends

GUNGIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII. In BB s2, we see Gungi the Wookie. Once more, that episode itself was a little... meh, but the fact that GUNGI SURVIVED makes it worth it. Anyone who watched the Gathering arc in CW knows the adorable baby Wookie Gungi. And when you realize that, um, they were still children at the end of the war and, um, there was something called Order 66 that killed all the Jedi, and not just the men but the women and the CHILDREN too. BUT GUNGI SURVIVED AND HE'S STILL JEDIing AROUND. That in and of itself made my heart happy. (also Omega, yes keep meditating, become a Jedi my child)

And for the last one I can think of, Cad Bane. Cad Bane's been popping up all over the place. A lot of people are like, but he was bested so easily by a smol child. Well, Omega's probably 12-14 and she's living with soldiers... think about Ahsoka, also 12-14 in season 2 of CW, who also beat Bane. Bane is cocky because he's up there with the top dogs, so he doesn't worry too much about the little girls. I actually appreciated that he was here, because he's a bounty hunter. He's gonna go after bounties. And he likes competing/proving he's the best. He kinda faaaades out of the picture after the Box arc in the CW, and yes he goes back to jail, but is that stopping him? Absolutely not. He's getting out of there in minutes. And yeah, he doesn't learn his lesson. He's gonna go kidnap more smol children. So while it wasn't the greatest use of Bane, I don't hate his cameo.


Okay, so that actually turned out pretty long, thanks for bearing with me, sorry if I spoiled everything for you. LET ME KNOW if I forgot anyone that you want me to rant about anymore, or if there's anything else you want to hear my opinion on. 

Thanks bye.

Writing Stuffs

 


Alright well, it's time for me to share what writing I have done so far this year.

Aaaaand there's already not a lot. 

I needed a break from To Die is Gain, so I'm working on the novella that comes directly after it, More than Conquerors. MtC was originally a short story I wrote several summers ago for a contest, and I decided it needed to be eXpAnDeD. I was planning on sharing that short story here, but I reread it and woooo boy that's not happening.

So I've written the first two chapters for that...

And I've done some work on a screenplay for one of my Star Wars stories. 

I wanted to share a section of my writing here, but I don't think I have enough of MtC to properly showcase that one, so I'm going to try a segment of my screenplay? This will be interesting, but hopefully still enjoyable.


INT. MIDNITE ONE COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

ZARA GHINWET, a half-tholotian, leans her head against the headrest of her seat, eyes shut. One side of her face is streaked with dirt and the other has a long, open gash running down her cheek from her right eye. The old scar across that same eye stands out white on her dark skin. She is illuminated by a dark red glow. Her helmet rests on her lap, and her hands are in tight fists that sit on the dome of her helmet.

CELWIK (V.O.)

Where are they?

Zara's forehead scrunches and her eyes screw closed tighter.

CELWIK (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Where is your little base?

Zara whimpers.

CELWIK (V.O.) (CONT'D)

You know it's futile to resist me. Just give up, padawan. You are nothing.

Zara's eyes fly open. A scream followed by laughter echoes around the small cockpit. Zara stares wide-eyed out at the swirling lights of hyperspace.

ZARA

It's not real.

She buries her face in her hands, shoulders shaking.

ZARA (CONT'D)

(sobbing)

It's not real. 


Okay, so obviously the formatting's a little weird. For anyone who has never read a screenplay before, the bold names indicate that that person is speaking. V.O. means voice over, CONT'D means continued. The italicized words are the action/description. Hope you enjoyed the crash course in screenwriting!

And yes, it's a bit darker of a scene... no feelings were harmed in the making of this blog post. some were harmed in the actual screenplay but we don't speak of that here


Anyways, all in all it was a very light writing month, but I'm hoping to pick up the pace a bit more. I'll keep y'all updated on MtC, and hopefully next month I'll have a little more to share. That's all for today!

January Doings

 



Okay, so I have really gotten off schedule... but we're gonna fix that! I will keep posting.

PROMISE.

ANYWAYS JANUARY IS DONE HOW DID THAT HAPPEN I CAN NO LONGER SAY LAST MONTH WAS LAST YEAR NOW IT WILL ALWAYS BE THE SAME YEAR AHHHHHH

Anyways again, we're calming down to jump into my life in JANUARY.


HIKING

If this post was a day later, I'd have a hiking trip to show case... As it is, I did no hiking in January...

PICTURES

Wow I didn't take many photos this month... YIKES. Anyways, here's what I got:





First time literally BABYsitting






 placing second at a chess tournament!!


winter jam with the youth group!


Like I said, not a whole lot of pictures. SCHOOL and GUITAR and VIDEO EDITING have kept me bUsY.

Oh, speaking of video editing... it's less actual editing and more I attempted to animate a little film thingie with Google Slides... BUT FOR ANYONE WHO KNOWS WHAT EPIC THE MUSICAL IS, ENJOY. (also those who don't know it, also enjoy...)

the horse and the infant by jorge rivera-herrans

MUSIC

Okay, so not much new stuff music-wise. I'm still loving The Arcadian Wild, still becoming a bit of a Hamilton junkie, becoming oBsEsSeD with Epic the Musical, found out about Seventh Day Slumber at WinterJam and potentially found another loved band??? 

On Spotify's webpage, you can see your top artists/listened-to songs for that month, and you can watch them change and stuff like that and it's fun. Here's my little "monthly wrapped"

(i did say I'm a bit of a Epic junkie...)

READING

Oooooh okay here we go... actually, I'm gonna also drop what I read in Dec. bc I didn't record that and I want you to see the glorious amount of RA books I've read...

Dec. reads:

The Siege of Macindaw - John Flanagan *3.5 stars*

Erak's Ransom - John Flanagan *4 stars*

The Kings of Clonmel - John Flanagan *4 stars*

Halt's Peril - John Flanagan *3.5 stars*

The Emperor of Nihon-Ja - John Flanagan *4 stars*

The Thunderhead - Neal Shusterman *3 stars*

Seaman - Gail Langer Karwoski *4.5 stars*

Macbeth - William Shakespeare *4 stars*

The Lost Stories - John Flanagan *4.5 stars*

Deliver - Tricia Mingerink *4.5 stars*

The Toll - Neal Shusterman *1 star*

The Maze Runner - James Dashner *4.5 stars*

The Tower of Nero - Rick Riordan *1.5 star*

Like a River - Kathy Cannon Wiechman *4 stars*

Palace of Stone - Shannon Hale *3 stars*

A New Beginning - John Flanagan *5 stars*

Light of the Jedi - Charles Soule *5 stars*

Jan. reads:

The Fallen Star - Claudia Gray *4 stars*

The Scorch Trials - James Dashner *4 stars* 

Outcasts - John Flanagan *4.5 stars*

Destroy - Tricia Mingerink *4 stars*

The Death Cure - James Dashner *4 stars*

The Red Fox Clan - John Flanagan *4 stars*

The Tournament at Gorlan - John Flanagan *4 stars*

Son of Sobek - Rick Riordan *3 stars*

Chalice of the Gods - Rick Riordan *3 stars*

Force Collector - Kevin Shinick *5 stars*

The Battle of Hackham Heath - John Flanagan *4 stars*



okaaaaay that was a heckin' lot of books, but there you go! No, I most certainly don't have a favorite author.... or favorite series... nope.

See y'all next week!