Chapter 14
May the Fourth be With you -minor spoilers-
Hello there.
I don't know how many of you realized or remembered, but May fourth is in a sense Star Wars day.
So I thought I'd take today as an excuse to fangirl about the Star Wars franchise.
Basically, get ready for a lot of ranking!
- The Red Room scene.
- Luke Skywalker vs. the entire First Order
- General "Hugs" -the scene when Poe is bantering with Hux at the beginning
- Chase scene in the Millenium Falcon on Crait
PLAYING DICE. ISN'T THAT WHY HE CARRIED AROUND THE PAIR OF GOLDEN DICE????? THAT'S
Most of the non-action sequences are kinda boring.
The Speeder chase around Courascant, the Arena/Battle of Geonosis, Obi-Wan vs. Jango, those
are all really great scenes. But the others... leave so much out. Why does Gunray want to kill
Padme? Who exactly is Syfo Dias? Should we have known Count Dooku before this movie? Also,
I feel like Natalie Portman and Hayden Christensen could have put a little more emotion into
their speech. Anakin sounds ready to take a nap the entire movie.
Also, I just hate the romance.
There are multiple fine scenes, just the rest aren't my favorite.
9. Rise of Skywalker
I don't have a whole lot against this movie. The fights are pretty good, the inner conflict of the
characters is pretty good, the visuals are pretty good.
The only things I have against it:
him how to defeat death, but that doesn't mean EVERYTHING that held the prequels and
Chapter 13 ----Warning! Long History Lesson!
Once upon a time, there were twin brothers: Ilton and Ritho Chadaron. Both were powerful in the Force but never became Jedi or Sith.
As time went on, the brothers married twin sisters, Myara and Likra Obeq.
For unknown reasons, whether it was because of the two sets if twins or some other reason, the two sides of the Chadaron family were mirrored.
The oldest children were both girls: Kyla and Lyra.
The next children were boys. Lyra's younger brother was named Tradisko. Kyla's became a Jedi and wasn't mentioned so as to not hamper his training.
After that came the triplets. Like Kyla's brother, one of the girls also became a Jedi and faded out of the family history. The other two girls were named Winera and Reyjin. Lyra's sisters were Malarcha, Nimin, and Dayra, although the latter two changed their names later on to be more like Malarcha's.
Finally, there were the youngest boys. To the immense surprise of both families, Lyra's youngest brother joined his cousins as a Jedi, while Kyla's became part of the more evil side.
Ilton and Myara's children grew up in a spacious apartment on Coruscant. When Kyla was older, she began training as a Senator's aide. Reyjin and Winera both dreamed of seeing the stars up close someday.
Ritho and Likra raised their family on the mysterious planet Andoh, the rumored headquarters of the Separatist Alliance after the battles of Geonosis and Utapau.
One day, while Ilton and Myara were out, a mysterious bounty hunter broke into their apartment, injured Kyla, and kidnapped the young twins.
This bounty hunter was Kykkin Tornyai.
After a time, he abandoned Reyjin in an alley in the lower levels of Coruscant, where she was found by Jedi Padawan Aera Oomaron and brought to the Temple.
Winera was raised by Kykkin with his daughter Amela in his stronghold on Dantooine.
The two girls grew up together, being trained by one of the most notorious bounty hunters in the galaxy. Secretly, Winera discovered she had the Force and trained herself how to use it.
When the girls were about 11 years old, Kykkin sent them both to find intel at a nearby base, not telling them who owned the base.
The girls sneaked inside and managed to make it too the control room before they were caught by Winera's cousin Lyra. Kykkin went to pick them up, explaining it was a test of their skills.
Later on, though, Lyra sent her sister Malarcha and several battle droids to kidnap the girls, intrigued by their abilities.
When Kykkin learned she had taken them, he demanded both back.
Lyra refused to return both girls, but offered to yield one.
Kykkin agreed, choosing to rescue Winera. As they left, Winera promised Amela she'd return for her one day, a promise she wasn't able to keep, as Lyra sold her to the Trandoshan hunters.
Furious at Kykkin for him not letting her attempt to rescue her friend, Winera left Dantooine and began building her own ship on Dagobah.
About three months later, Kykkin tracked her down and attempted to reinstall her as his assistant. Winera refused and they began a heated battle, both verbal and physical. Eventually, Kykkin got her onto his ship and took off, but she managed to hijack the hyperdrive so that they couldn't leave the system.
During the ensuing fight, Kykkin pulled a small Jedi cruiser out of lightspeed. On board were a Knight and three Younlings. The ship's systems were damaged and the ship was on a crash course for Dagobah.
Kykkin offered to save the passengers on board in exchange for Winera returning with him.
Not trusting he would keep his word, Winera refused and fled in an escape pod.
In retaliation, Kykkin shot the engines of both the pod and the cruiser, flinging the pod far away from where the Jedi crashed. When she finally found the site, the Knight and two Younglings were dead.
The third, Narjrish Tymi, was barely alive, but he managed to help Winera set up a homing beacon for other Jedi to find them. After a day or two, a young Knight named Saij Farr arrived to pick him. As a way to thank her, the Jedi left Winera with a chunk of kyber crystal to power her ship.
Winera continued to build her ship, some security mechanisms to prevent Kykkin from returning, and even assembled some droids.
Then her long-lost twin sister showed up and offered to make her a Jedi.
March Muchness
March Muchness is a fun celebration of all things Wonderland related. 11 other bloggers and I are hosting this Alice in Wonderland themed blog tag.
We each came up with a Wonderland-inspired question which you can take and answer on your blog as well as enjoy our answers!
My answers will be found here at My Jedi Story, and you will find everyone else's below:
- What is a topic that grew curiouser and curiouser the more you studied/researched it?
- If you could invite three fictional characters to a tea party, who would they be?
- Which Wonderland character do you feel you’re the most like?
- If you could drink a magic potion that changed one thing about you, what would it be?
- How IS a raven like a writing desk?
- If you were to make an enemy of Father Time, what time in the day would you choose to repeat?
- If you fell down a rabbit hole, what would the land you pop into look like?
- If you could have the body of one type of creature and the head of another (for example, the Mock Turtle has the body of a turtle and the head of a calf), what would that combination be and why?
- Have you read or written anything stylistically close to Alice in Wonderland? Tell us about it.
- If you could either be as tall as a tree or as small as a mouse for an hour, which would you choose and what would you do?
- If you could give your younger or future self one piece of Very Good Advice, what would it be?
Chapter 12
My blaster sprang from its holster almost of its own accord. "Let her go."
"Will I?" The other girl cocked her head to the side, considering me. "I'm not certain." She whispered something into my sister's ear that I couldn't catch.
Reyjin's eyes were wide from fear, but she shook her head vehemently at whatever suggestion was just made.
Behind me, Kykkin was starting to get up again, so I set my blaster to its stun setting and shot him. Once more he slumped to the ground, this time unconscious.
I spin my blaster back around so it points at the girl. "It's kind of rude not to introduce yourself."
"But you already know who I am." The girl nudged my sister. "If you don't remember, Reyjin can tell you."
Reyjin gulped hard. She clearly wasn't comfortable with being held at saber-point. "She's Lyra's younger sister."
"I see." I twirled my blaster thoughtfully. The same niggling feeling that I'd seen her before returned. What was her name? Ma... Ma...
Suddenly I remembered.
"Malarcha," I whispered.
Malarcha smiled broadly. "Ah, so you do remember me. Your sister didn't at first."
Winera, look to the left.
I'd almost forgotten Reyjin's and my telepathic link in the excitement. Stealthly, I shifted my eyes to the left.
Reyjin's lightsaber lay in the grass, but was slowly moving toward me.
I snapped my attention back to Malarcha. "Let my sister go, and we can work this out peacefully."
"I prefer what Reyjin calls 'agressive negotiations', but as you wish." Malarcha moved the arm that had been pressing Reyjin against her and slammed her lightsaber hilt against the back of my sister's head.
Reyjin slumped to the ground, unconscious. Ow.
Malarcha brushed her hands off and hung her saber from her belt. "What's in this for you?"
"What do you mean?" I also holstered my blaster, but kept my hand on the hilt, just in case.
"I mean, what do you want? To become a Jedi?" Malarcha laughed. "Certainly both you and Reyjin know you're too old. The Council would never let you in. Last time they did, hoping for a Chosen One, he left the Order to start a family." She slowly nodded. "That's what it is, isn't it? You think you're the new Chosen One."
I shook my head. "I have no idea what you're talking about."
"You want to be the one to destory the Sith."
I chuckled. "Not really. I just want a purpose in the galaxy."
"I can offer you one." Malarcha took a step closer and held out her hand. "You could join me."
I stared at her gloved palm. "Last time we met, you kidnapped me and my closest friend."
"Ah yes." Malarcha retracted her hand slightly. "You still hold that against me, don't you?"
"You killed her!" I swallowed several times to hold in the tears.
"Oh, no." She shook her heaad. "You friend is still very much alive, last I checked."
"Where is she?" I hate how my voice trembled.
"Trandosha."
My mouth droped open. The way she said it in such a flat voice...
Using the Force, I grabbed Reyjin's lightsaber and sprang at her.
Caught off guard, Malarcha stumbled back a few steps before drawing her own weapon.
Over and over the two blades clashed in a lightning-fast dance of doom. Gold on red.
At one point, Malarcha's blade thrust mine into the ground, sending sparks and smoke into my face. I coughed and stepped back to catch my breath.
Malarcha stalked toward me, lightsaber at the ready. She was tireless, attacking again and again relentlessly.
I, on the other hand, was tiring. No longer was I on the offense. Now, I was barely keeping my sword arm up to fend off the blows.
What had Reyjin's plan been when she showed me her lightsaber? Did she actually think my one lesson would be enough to fend off a half-Sith who pobably had had hundreds of lessons?
Malarcha noticed I was spent. "Surrender now and walk away. I'll let you live."
"And Reyjin." I didn't lower my saber.
"I'll even kill Kykkin for you."
I raise an eyebrow. "Enticing, but no. I'm not making deals that end wth my sister dying."
"Very well then." Malarcha stretched her hand toward me again, although this time she seemed to be strangling an invisible enemy.
Or not invisible.
Reyjin's lightsaber dropped from my hand as my esophagus constricted. I choked for breath, trying to open my airway.
The last thing I thought before blacking out was, I'm sorry, Reyjin.
Update and Apology
Alright, so I'm just going to say I don't think I'm very good with consistently posting. XD
I am very sorry about that.
Anyways, down to business.
I hope you remember "Sneak-Peak Week". Well, I was thinking, it might be fun to have another space where I can do more posts like that. And yes, that means more deadlines that I can screw up.
So, this new area is called The Castle Ruins. It is full of new and mysterious portals that lead to different realms. Some mine, some the creations of other authors.
I'm hoping to post on it once a week, but if that isn't possible, I will be certain to get out at least 2 posts per month. Deal?
And no, I'm not going to be abandoning the Jedi Story.
Winera still has a crazy story up her sleeves...
HERE IS THE LINK TO
I hope to meet many of you there!
May the Force be with you!
Chapter 11
I never said Kykkin was smart. But I never thought he was this dumb.
As I raced at him, showering the area around him with laser bolts, he simply stood there watching me, every now and then twitching so one of my shots missed him.
He didn't think I could beat him.
Well, I did it once, I could do it again.
As I got closer, Kykkin moved into his fighting stance, analyzing my every move.
But it has been four years since we last met, and I had some new tricks up my sleeve.
Behind me, Reyjin and Zenla had begun to engage the guards, so I didn't have to worry about them. Kykkin could have my full attention.
When I got within a yard of him, I feinted lunging to the left, then began to crouch. One of my old moves was to slide right between my opponent's legs. Kykkin had been the one who helped me perfect it, and he had me do it plenty of times, so I was sure he remembered it.
Sure enough, he snapped his legs together, blocking that way of attack.
That wasn't my way today.
Using the Force, I leaped over his head and struck at his legs before he could respond. My blow caught him off balance and he stumbled forward, but Kykkin Tornyai isn't a martial arts menace in the Outer Rim for no reason.
He caught himself and quickly spun to face me. "Maybe you have changed some. Hoping to be a Jedi yourself, hm?"
"Perhaps." I holstered my blaster and lowered myself into a crouch.
He laughed derisively. "You can't actually be hoping to win, are you?"
Actually, yes, that was exactly what I was hoping would happen.
Kykkin shook his head in mock sadness. "Don't make me kill you, Winera."
"You wouldn't have the guts to, you big coward." I spat out the words as I charged him again.
Kykkin sidestepped my wild lunge and grabed my wrist before my punch landed. I wrestled my hand free and flipped over him. As he turned around to face me again, I launched myself into a front walkover, looping my legs over his shoulders. He shoved at me, but I pulled myself down, forcing him to the ground.
I stood over him, blaster once more drawn and pointing at his face. "You're beaten."
He stared at me with an expression of vague shock, but also satisfaction. "Am I, though?" He nodded to the left.
I turned to see the girl from my nightmares holding Reyjin in front of her with a blood-red lightsaber to my sister's throat.
She smiled evilly. "A remarkable display, to be sure."
Q&A Day
You asked!
I answer!
Y'all asked me some questions about me and my stories, so noooooooow......
I'M GONNA ANSWER THEM!
Question 1 from R. F. Gammon:
"Which of your characters is your favorite?"
From the Jedi Story, probably Winera or Ava or Raedon. (who will be met later). From my other stories...? well, probably Zarkah or Norma.
Question 2 from R. F. Gammon:
"Why write about Star Wars, specifically?"
Well, for a while I had a hard time writing ANYTHING. Then I started playing this Star Wars-based game with some of my neighbors. We have this CRAZY story coming, so one day I decided to start writing about it. And I just kept going, until I thought I'd post it all here! :)
Question 3 from R. F. Gammon:
"Who is your favorite character in Star Wars proper?"
Qui-Gon Jinn. Or Chirrut Imwe. Or R2-D2. NO ONE loves the actual hero enough! :(
Question 4 from R. F. Gammon:
"What music do you like to write to?"
To tell the truth, I don't really listen to that much music while I write. If I do, though, probably Two Steps from Hell, Lindsey Stirling, Star Wars ;), or Lord of the Rings. Heap on the instrumentals!
Question 5 from R. F. Gammon:
"What is the best thing to do with an open afternoon?"
Read. Write. Play chess. Sew. See friends.
Question 6 from Unknown (a.k.a., my mom;)):
"Do you ever have writer's block? How do you get past it?"
Yes. Yes, I do. *Sigh* A lot, actually. I also suffer from the case of not wanting to work on that particular story just then, so.... yeah. I get past it by working on a different story. That's why I have started so many! :)
Question 7 from Unknown:
"Have you planned your whole story out ahead of time, or do you make it up as you go along?"
It depends on the story. For my Star Wars story, this is all something I played with my neighbors. For some of my stories, I decide what will happen in the other books before I've even written the second chapter of the first! In one of my stand-alones, Woods, I have a few ideas about what I want to happen, but I'm mostly just deciding what happens as I go. So it really depends.
Question 8 from Nicki Chapelway:
"What's your favorite trope? To read? To write? (because they don't necessarily have to be the same thing xD)"
To write, I really like long-lost relatives of some sort. To read....? I don't know.
Question 9 from Nicki Chapelway:
"Favorite ice cream flavor?"
Normal flavors? Neapolitan. For the Kinda-crazy-Maine-local-ice-cream-shops-only flavors, Lobster Tracks (vanilla ice cream with caramel swirl and caramel cups) or Maple.
Question 10 from Nicki Chapelway:
"Any 2021 writing goals?"
Well, I do hope that I get at least two more stories accepted by Havok. I want to finish the first draft of Team 14 book one: Stones of Forever. And.......well, probably just keep working on my other books ad stuff.
The next few questions were unable to load on my blog, so they were sent to me.
Question 11 from felicialang:
"Where do you get inspiration for your stories?"
It depends on the story. When I'm writing my Havok short stories, the people at Havok give you a prompt, so that helps in that case. Usually, I start a story from a name I really like, or a song, or something like that. I especially write about the things I like to read.
Question 12 from felicialang:
"How often do you write?"
I try to write something every day. Sometimes it's a Havok story, sometimes it's one of my longer books, and sometimes it's school super boring just an essay or something.
Question 13 from felicialang:
"How do you come up with your characters?"
The name always comes first. I hear a name that catches my ear, and I latch onto it. Going through my stories, you'll find I always have a character that is supposed to be me. In Team 14, it's Larken. In Woods, it's Alet. Often, I reuse a personality from a different character that I really like. I don't base my characters after real people very often, but it does happen occasionally.
I hope y'all had fun reading this post!
Remember: you can ask questions ANYTIME. I want to know what you're thinking about my story.
Have a great day!
Chapter 10
What do you get when you cross an angry bounty-bunter crime lord, a painful leg, and two Jedi?
The pickle we were currently in.
Reyjin and Zenla both drew their lightsabers and got ready for a fight. Kykkin simply gestured for his soldiers to lower their weaponry and advanced toward us.
"I can't say I'm surprised to see you here, Winera," he droned. "Just surprised to see you with Jedi."
"Get used to my surprises. There are many of them." I kept my blaster pointed at him.
He shook his head, clicking tongue. "Always had the flair for drama. You haven't changed much."
Reyjin and Zenla were staring at me, but I ignored them. I can't focus on them right now.
"On the contrary, I've actually changed quite a bit." I spin my blaster lazily.
Kykkin is up to something again.
He's stalling.
So will I.
Reyjin sidled up to me. "He's up to something," she mouthed. I barely nodded.
"Nothing good, probably." I shrugged.
Kykkin took a step forward. I pointed my blaster at him again warningly.
He stopped. "Last chance to surrender, Winera. I don't want to have to hurt you."
I acted like I'm considering. "Hm. Almost sounds tempting. But, nah, I'm okay."
"I'm warning you!" Kykkin took another step forward. "All of you."
"Never." Zenla shook her head vehemently.
"Nope." Reyjin twitched her lightsaber.
I simply shook my head. "Not this time."
"Still haven't forgiven me?" Kykkin smirked. That old expression brought back so many old memories- no.
Not right now.
"No, I haven't. I never will either." I still felt her hand slipping out of my grip.
"No?" Kykkin's smirk seemed to widen. "I have no regrets."
My anger flared out of control. "No regrets about leaving your daughter to die?" The scars on my wrist and forearm burned. "Do you have no conscience?"
Before he could reply, I opened fire on him.
SO.
Painful.
I am hoping to do a Q&A post at some point SOON.
If you have any questions about me, my books, etc., send them in the comments below.
As soon as I get 5 or more questions, I will make the post.
So please, PLEASE send me questions!
Have a great day!
Happy New Year and Last S.P.W. Post
HAPPY NEW YEAR Y'ALL!!!!!!!!
Man, 2020 was crazy, wasn't it?
But, now it's 2021!
And it's the final Sneak-Peek Week post!
So.........






